This study explores the use of ChatGPT-4.1 as a formative assessment tool for identifying revision patterns in young adolescents’ argumentative writing. ChatGPT-4.1 shows moderate agreement with human coders on identifying evidence-related revision patterns and fair agreement on explanation-related ones. Implications for LLM-assisted formative assessment of young adolescent writing are discussed.

Automated writing evaluation systems can improve students’ writing insofar as students attend to the feedback provided and revise their essay drafts in ways aligned with such feedback. Existing research on revision of argumentative writing in such systems, however, has focused on the types of revisions students make (e.g., surface vs. content) rather than the extent to which revisions actually respond to the feedback provided and improve the essay. We introduce an annotation scheme to capture the nature of sentence-level revisions of evidence use and reasoning (the ‘RER’ scheme) and apply it to 5th- and 6th-grade students’ argumentative essays. We show that reliable manual annotation can be achieved and that revision annotations correlate with a holistic assessment of essay improvement in line with the feedback provided. Furthermore, we explore the feasibility of automatically classifying revisions according to our scheme.